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The Snowstorm

The coffee house vowed to remain open all night because of the snowstorm. I was sitting near the gas fireplace sipping on my third hot cocoa watching the winds whip the snow into a frenzy.

A well bundled creature emerged from the haze. It was covered head to toe in the white stuff. Quickly the door opened and closed. This wild creature began the dance of peeling off clothes until a tiny figure emerged.

“One latte,” she intoned softly before turning.

“Ah, there you are.” She said, looking at me. “Are you staying or coming home?”

She had found me.

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I'd finally had enough of his abuse. I donned my parka, picked up my suitcase, and headed for the door.

"What, are you nuts? Look out the window, there's a blazing blizzard out there!"

I stopped to stare at him, remembering his cruel words and gaslight games. I lifted my free hand to my cheek, still smarting from his slap. The past and present were intolerable. I put my hand to the doorknob.

"Okay, bitch, but once you leave, you can't come back."

I briefly considered the blinding snowstorm before me, and walked out into the swirling whiteness of my future.

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