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J.S. Mortiroe's avatar

She sensed it was there.

It stank of rotten meat, and its breath quickened as her hand moved to the edge.

It sniggered, so she quickly retracted her hand. She went too soon.

Now to count, she thought.

One…

Long fingers appeared at her feet.

Three…

It reached for her leg.

‘Eight, nine, ten!’

She smacked its dark hand before it touched her.

It shrieked and pulled back.

She bent over and looked at it upside down.

‘Tag, you're it!’ she said, smiling.

The entity under the bed smiled back.

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Ken W.'s avatar

90 MG of an entity.

It unfurled from the hole in the ground where they buried him.

It waved overhead and I couldn’t look away.

A void, a gap in the world where no matter what I felt, I couldn’t fill it.

I went home, I lived for years, and it remained the same. Following me.

They say we’re supposed to forgive. But the one who took him away eventually got to leave prison, go home, to a family that never stopped believing.

I found him. I made sure they were all there.

So I could remove him, and make them see it too.

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