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The Puzzle

Prompt by: THE FICTION DEALER: Microdose on the word Puzzle, with 100 words!

He stared at the puzzle for a long time. His eyes flicked up and down, left and right, and still no other part of him moved.

His opponent noticed the sweat pouring rivulets down his face.

The audience sensed the tension building to levels that kept raising the stakes.

Suddenly a twinge started at the corner of his mouth. The eyes pondered as the mirth became reflected in his lip movements.

His eyes flickered as his hand moved forward, then back, as he took one more look at the board with serious intentions.

“Checkmate,” he cried as his opponent wept.

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

Miguel, I am in the process of dissolving my household and reducing my possessions to the absolute minimum. Also I am also. So no I cannot offer pledging for the interesting games. I give you 102 words of a Puzzle instead:

100mg of a Puzzle with Trees, a Forrest and a Canyon.

A puzzle, I thought. My life is a puzzle. Missing pieces, edges torn, some parts warped from trying too hard to fit them. For years, blank spaces. Not metaphorically—truly gone. I remembered nothing. Then fragments returned, not as truth, but as echoes. The brain doesn’t store—it recreates. So each piece wasn’t found, it was born again. That’s when I knew: I’d never solve it. Never complete the image on the box I never got. I traded puzzles for forests. Got lost in trees. Then holes appeared. Real holes. And the Canyon whispered, I’m not a puzzle. I am the shape around it.

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