Characters develop with chocolate chip cookies and milk. A treat that gives great feeling and energy to return home. Maybe even to be offered a Job as Santa ringing a bell for donations. The year is soon begin again there is hope here that the fire place soot will wash off and a clean slate will be written with a happy new year.
Very nice! Such a great message about what's truly important at Christmas. And I love the implication of that clicking suggesting the 'gift' might be something sinister. Even Kevin didn't go that far to protect his house when he was 'Home Alone'! Haha... 😎
Oh wow! Haha! The way he was insisting, as well, made me think he was definitely up to something. But that's really great that it works both ways, and can be read as a very innocent story, or something darker. Great job... 😎
Awww this was so cute. Little man had everything but also nothing. And he changed a guy about to do bad things too. So sweet
This is full of christmas cheer me old mucker. warms the soul like a mulled wine 😃
Characters develop with chocolate chip cookies and milk. A treat that gives great feeling and energy to return home. Maybe even to be offered a Job as Santa ringing a bell for donations. The year is soon begin again there is hope here that the fire place soot will wash off and a clean slate will be written with a happy new year.
When he gets back and his kids open the box they're gonna find a Mogwai in it. With no instructions...
I love this story - it's either the beginning or the end of a very cool movie. And it's lovely.
There should definitely be a Mogwai in it, though.
I had to google Mogwai lol. I didn’t know the furry gremlins were not called gremlins lol.
Great story Miguel! 🎅🎄
This is such a good short story - you did really good with this one.
Thank you Keith!
Thank you for resharing this. I've got tears running down my face. Beautiful
Thank you Diane!
It's probably just the way my brain (and my fiction) works but I expected a dark enending. This was sweet and fun!
Don't worry I have a chilling and dark Christmas tale lined up for next week :)
Very nice! Such a great message about what's truly important at Christmas. And I love the implication of that clicking suggesting the 'gift' might be something sinister. Even Kevin didn't go that far to protect his house when he was 'Home Alone'! Haha... 😎
Oh it was just supposed to mean it's a huge and expensive lego set 😂😂 but I love your thinking
Oh wow! Haha! The way he was insisting, as well, made me think he was definitely up to something. But that's really great that it works both ways, and can be read as a very innocent story, or something darker. Great job... 😎
I love this story! Poor little guy...
Yeah, dude has everything and nothing at the same time.
Love, love, love this story!
❤️ Thank you!
You deserve the praise.