E.T. Hansen is right--I immediately want the main character to figure this out and either prove it's not him or figure someway out of it! On to part 2!
Good story – mystery, build-up, now I want to know how he's going to get away with it! (It's a strange phenomenon of fiction that you immediately identify with the main character and want him to succeed or survive, even if he's a murderer!)
Very creepypastaish. Do you read creepypastas?
I wrote one that got narrated.
Yup I enjoy them.
E.T. Hansen is right--I immediately want the main character to figure this out and either prove it's not him or figure someway out of it! On to part 2!
Great (and terrifying) story!
Thank you, Rena! I'm really proud of this one.
goose bumps
Hihi
Good story – mystery, build-up, now I want to know how he's going to get away with it! (It's a strange phenomenon of fiction that you immediately identify with the main character and want him to succeed or survive, even if he's a murderer!)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the finale :)
I love these type of things. Gets your heart pumping. This is quite a really good intro. Great work.
I have my heart running crazy at this moment 😵
Oh man, I'm hooked.
I'm glad you liked it! :) There will be more!
Love love LOVE this. I want to read more! Honestly,the visuals you created were just great
Thank you so much! There will be more next week :)
Fantastic! I can't wait 😁