Well done! In the end, he does the right thing. (Of course only after doing the wrong thing a few times!) I don't know that I would have the guts to do it (the right thing). Thanks, keep up the good work!
Brilliantly ended! I kept asking myself "man, how's he gonna get out of this?" And for the answer to so clearly be "he isn't" is such a powerful message for me. It would've been so easy for you to just give him a way out or do like a jeckyl and Hyde thing where the monster was someone else in his body but no it wasn't it was him but the conscious part of him owning that was
Thank you so much ❤️ I'm glad you liked it. Yeah while writing it I felt like he isn't a bad person and the guilt of his actions won't let him live, even if he got out of it. So this seemed like the only fitting conclusion to the story :)
And part 3...wow! So much opportunity here, Miguel S., to explore what happens before and after!
The realization and connection to other occurrences! The fight to not sleep. How long indeed!
Well done! In the end, he does the right thing. (Of course only after doing the wrong thing a few times!) I don't know that I would have the guts to do it (the right thing). Thanks, keep up the good work!
You need to make that a book. I was like "WHATTTT!!". And like L.L. Ford said he can't get out of it!
Brilliant ending!
Thank you so much!
Brilliantly ended! I kept asking myself "man, how's he gonna get out of this?" And for the answer to so clearly be "he isn't" is such a powerful message for me. It would've been so easy for you to just give him a way out or do like a jeckyl and Hyde thing where the monster was someone else in his body but no it wasn't it was him but the conscious part of him owning that was
WOO
Fantastic, thank you.
It was indeed worth the wait.
agree - it's the question you ask from the beginning - what would I do?
Thank you so much ❤️ I'm glad you liked it. Yeah while writing it I felt like he isn't a bad person and the guilt of his actions won't let him live, even if he got out of it. So this seemed like the only fitting conclusion to the story :)
Ohh I'm wondering now, was there a confession or just a reporting of a crime...I love the ending
The ending is open to interpretation, but I think the guilt got him in the end :) Thank you for reading!
THE WAIT WAS WORTH IT!!
Glad it finished strong ❤️ I loved your additions to microdosing today!
Thankyou! I try to write on each of your prompts, even if I produce something a day or two later.
No worries :) They are out there and not binded by time :)