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Richbee's avatar

Baby’s crown emerges, sunshine spreads mother’s limbs; dragon roots divine, Kundalini chakra dormant; coiled serpent at base of spine—teaches fire, music, weaving nets. Uncoiled the crown chakra; moon and sunlight, almost equal; ther raised crown pierces the spinal stem—knows she is Life—Umbilical cord,, a spiral naval.

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Miguel S.'s avatar

I really like this one Richard! Well done

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Brilliantly original

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Richbee's avatar

Thank you seeing the light.

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Cameron Arksey's avatar

Swear I didn’t even look at your story first. I just hopped into my WordCounter right off the push notification. I think me and @kaitzell may be completely addicted.

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Kait Zeller's avatar

Can confirm! I am shamelessly addicted.

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Miguel S.'s avatar

Haha, be careful not to overdose!

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Ika Wright's avatar

Highly unlikely :P

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Kait Zeller's avatar

I pulled my car over to participate because I could not wait.

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Miguel S.'s avatar

You guys are insane! It makes me really happy you like it so much!

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