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Dylan Delgado's avatar

I always found myself at the periphery of every group I joined. There was always the sense that I didn’t belong.

Why didn’t I belong? That question haunted me. Was it my clothes, my mannerisms, or something else?

“Oh, how I long for someone who gets me!” I exclaimed, alone.

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Rolando Andrade's avatar

My 50 mg of Longing

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you know,

I'm missing you,

your touch

the way you looked

at the waves of the sea,

your little moments

of nothing,

You know

you and me

were one

now we're two

and that's why

I long

for your skin

your gentle touch,

your white

silence

of peace,

you know..

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

You know how longing works—

it shows up uninvited at lunch,

making you stare at sugar packets

and cold coffee gone bitter,

while you wonder if she still

folds newspaper corners into triangles,

the way she did that Tuesday

when time knew how to behave itself.

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Arnaly Arriaga Blanco's avatar

I love this!

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Miguel S.'s avatar

Gloria 😭 I... this... I'm speecheless.

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olivia s's avatar

Microdosing - 50mg of Longing

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“What do you prefer? A short, meaningful life, or a long, miserable life?”

The patient replied: ‘Why did you ask me that?’

The therapist cleared his throat.

“When did you feel most alive?”

The centuries-old immortal chuckled, longing for the past.

‘When I was a human and time was limited.’

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

PROMPT: LONGING

THE FULL HOUSE

We’d been longing for Christmas all December, and had lots of things planned for when our whole family came to stay.

But once they’d arrived, the pressure of living together, and trying to cook for everyone soon became too much.

And we were longing for it all to be over… 🎄😎🎄

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Good question, that why?

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Jeannine's avatar

Another great, sad story...

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Jeannine's avatar

If wishes were fishes, we'd all live like kings,

We'd all live forever, and fly without wings.

But there are no genies, nor fairies, nor sprites.

If longing brought morning, we'd never see light.

If we never struggle to capture desire,

We'd never climb higher, we'd die in the mire.

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Theresa Greene's avatar

That ache in the heart

The love that has no home

unrequited longing

Yearning for his touch

Never to feel the warmth

of his arms

Love that has no home .

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Miguel S.'s avatar

Beautiful Theresa

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Theresa Greene's avatar

Thank you, Miguel

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Teyani Whitman's avatar

Longing 50 mg

all good was annihilated.

The black hole sucks me into its abyss.

no longer feeling air for my lungs, no longer seeing even to my palms, no longer locating up nor down.

The longing for your spirit was useless in the face of obscurity.

The Impossible to fathom is here

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Nick's avatar

Longing

“This last lesson takes up half the week,” I think. “The clock is mocking me. I swear it’s moving backwards. All I want is for that bell. Then: freedom…”

“Nick, how do you go about solving this one?”

“Er…”

“I knew it. Not paying attention again, eh boy? See me after class. Detention.”

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Miguel S.'s avatar

Ah, poor Nick. The thing he wants to most delayed once more.

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Longing.

Long cold nights, red long johns; summer sunsets longing to hold hands. Mirrored moments, brush stokes, tender touches together. Minute hands last click when we parted; last scene, your dress unfold. Your double delight scoops of frosty freeze filled my cone of emptiness; your hand, warmed in mine.

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Logan the Lobotomizer's avatar

“Scorps: Longing”

I stared intently at the mirror. Black leathery skin, cyan-eyes, mandibles, chelicerae. I didn’t always look like this. My heart sank, and my stomach felt hollow. Pain. Rage replaced grief. The mirror shattered into pieces beneath my pincher and rained into the sink. Why should I bother continuing to survive?

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Miguel S.'s avatar

The pain speaks so deeply from this one. Great stuff Logan.

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Logan the Lobotomizer's avatar

Thank you!

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C J O'Hare's avatar

Blitzing through the gasping herd of breathless runners, he lurched over the finish line with his first ever sub-twenty 5K PR.

"Jesus Christ Muldoon, What's your secret?”

He tapped the butt of the pack and a single Marlboro sat up. Proud. Inviting. Pinching it between his teeth, he grinned.

“Longing.”

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Miguel S.'s avatar

haha. I know people who would outsprint Bolt if that meant they would get a beer sooner. Great take C J!

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C J O'Hare's avatar

Cheers Miguel!

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

He gazed at her with carnivorous craving. Devouring her. With hunger. Unbridled lust. There was no other word for it. After all these years with her it never abated. It was unnatural, he thought. Unhealthy. The longing for his life predating her knew no bounds and would never go away.

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Robert Garron's avatar

Microdosing - 50mg of "Longing"

AFAR

The stars spun outside the window. Besides that, they remained unmoved. The vessel, stuck under the thumb of relativity, could only move so fast. Bernard's Star was a stone's throw on the galactic stage, but would still take centuries to reach.

Within the bounds of the generation ship, the travelers passed the time in memorial reverie, pining for their old home and longing for the new.

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Miguel S.'s avatar

That's a cool concept and visual. Great work!

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Robert Garron's avatar

Thank you, man!

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